Continuing Scarlet's adventure with the little black notebook that grants her every wish she plays a bit more with herself and her friends.
Part 2 to this little series that I'm doing. It consists of chapters 3-4.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.60
- Characters: 4.80
- Technical: 4.20
AG
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
one of the best, please keep going
Shadyguy
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
amazing story, can't wait to see where this goes, really hoping for her to use it vindictively and make bitchynaughty girls grow in other ways
XXX
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
d3nia1
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Amazing! Best I've ready in a long time.
DocErotiq
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Good stuff. Work on cleaning up your grammar and typos just a bit before posting. Solid work all across the board. Keep it up.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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