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The Overflowing Bra

Nightshade
Deck of Changes: Las Vegas
While on a trip to Las Vegas, a young grad student finds herself playing a card game where her body, and indeed her very identity, is at stake. 
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Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
what happens in vagus stays in vagus

my only complant is the last change granted for winning. i think i would have liked a clearer understanding of why he got to chose when it was her that won. maybe if she had asked for his advice or input then ignored him when he suggested something ethical and gotten bigger boobs or had him suggest the boobs.
PJ
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Not bad, but I wish there were more of a game to the card deck, not just turning them over.
Rasputin
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
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