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The Overflowing Bra

Goldleaf
Echo I
Having inexplicably developed the ability to change women's bodies, our protagonist bumps into an ex-girlfriend, and simply can’t help himself. Having cause her to grow just enough to pique her interest, he soon finds her at his apartment, seeking revenge…or is it just bigger boobs? The first of a series written a while ago and re-edited recently.
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flies
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Absolutely stellar. Super sexy. The writing was unusually good. Judging by the title, it seems you have plans for more, and if so, I'll be delighted. 

This is exactly the kind of thing I come to this website to find. Great work.
DarkHeart
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This was a really fun rump, it's really nice to see a woman enjoy herself in one of these stories without some sort of mind control.

Hope to see more.
namrego
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This is very nicely written, intimate and sexy  nice job
vicious
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I really liked this. I have to say I haven't been this into a story in a bit. Please keep it up!
Billdemon
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I enjoyed this more than anything I have read in a while, well done.
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