The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Kodos
Paid in Full, Part IV
Huge, horny, and on vacation with nothing better to do that eat, drink and have sex, Joanna is in heaven.  She's pretty sure that Reyna's long gone now, so she won't need to worry about her mysterious and eager-to-please visitor pumping her up so full that Joanna might actually be in danger of exploding.
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Ellofri
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
A satisfying conclusion to this story. Can't wait for the next story in this universe.
Killfrog
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
I feel like part three was better, but this is still one of the best stories I've read. 
anon
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Its another Kodos story! Which is both good and bad. All the usual stylistic tics are here paragraph upon paragraph of detailed firstperson description of a woman getting plushly, orgasmically, ponderously glutted with fat, with an emphasis on her overfilled, quivering breasts. If you like it, its more of the same. If you dont, its no change from the rest of their stories, although thats not necessarily a bad thing for the rest of us.
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