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The Overflowing Bra

Johnny Stiff
Flour Power 2
John and Claire continue their sex-capades during the covid lock down. Claire has some plans for the future that just might intrigue John to go along with it. 
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Fan
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Where can I find part 3?
Would like to know how it works with the three
Guy Incognito
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 2
I really liked the story even though there wasn't much BE in this one.  I do have to say, I would definitely go through and check your grammar again before posting the next chapter  there were quite a few errors to the point it was almost hard to understand at times.

Can't wait for the next chapter!
JustAReader
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Waiting for the next part.
DickJ
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Really great stuff, can't wait for the next part!
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