The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Fidget
Extra-Perceptual
A meteor falling into a woman's backyard gives her the ability to read minds. The catch is that any time she overhears a thought about herself, that thought becomes her reality.
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Ihhb
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 1, Technical= 4
Meh
Someguy
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Short and sweet, though my preference is for more BE
Catfish
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Some good realitychanging here, with an interesting mechanic for how it works.
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