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The Overflowing Bra

Go2daWest
Too Many Drinks
Craig is having the hangover of his life when he wakes to strange scenery that is not any bed he has ever seen. Quite possibly his girldfriend has doomed the universe. Whoops. A short story of discovery.
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Sobtac
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
I read this on Literotica a while ago  and it's nice, a short sweet, more than the sum of its parts addition. Would have loved for a little more detial but wow, this is definitely good for a little diversion
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