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The Overflowing Bra

Go2daWest
The Failing of Words
Justin Halvech is a young jock with a minimal grasp of the English language. Luckily for him, he's found a mysterious lamp. Let's just hope he can articulate his desires. This time, the grammatical mistakes are on purpose, I swear!
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CmdrMark
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
Not my kind of story, I'm sure it will have it's fans though! Very much a parody fic.
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