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The Overflowing Bra

Go2daWest
Little Miss Mindy (Revised Version)
So... I accidently uploaded the wrong version of the story last time and I didn't notice until someone pointed it out. This is the cleaned up and edited version of the story.

Rising idol Little Miss Mindy is a growing sensation, literally! Fans come see the shortstack beauty for her awe inspiring form, and stay for her musical talent. This story is quite short, but I hope people enjoy!
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