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The Overflowing Bra

Mitatell
Illaria's Magic Book
In an effort to tease out Milan's inner desires, Illaria crafts a book. A book tied to her own essence that will allow anything written about her to come true. But in asking Milan to write about her deepest desires, Illaria might be in for a bit of a surprise.
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Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
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