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The Overflowing Bra

Horselover Fat
THE PERILS OF BEING POPULAR
Jamie wishes he were more popular. Of course, he neglects to clarify HOW or with WHOM. A short one-shot written to go with a recent drawing. Non MLP fans beware
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Anonymous
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Woefully short, but I like the concept and illustration.
Your username is a cool ValisPKD reference, btw
FiskPrime
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
This is much too short. There's so much to explore here, but you rush through it. 
bob
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 1, Technical= 2
 
Bobby
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
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