After cruelly injuring her assigned partner for a school project, Amy learns the hard way that revenge is a dish best served with a side of hot, steamy sex.
Cursed to grow a dick over a foot long and given an inflatable body, Amy is first put through the wringer by the vengeful Mandy and then left to stew in her own juices. And OH BOY are there a lot of juices! There's also a lot of soap, suds, humiliation, mental gymnastics, mindfucks, and reluctant rape. (I mean, after all, how ELSE is Amy supposed to set up the perfect world where she and her best friend can just be happy together?)
Not covered by the tags available here: belly inflation & cum inflation (both oral and vaginal) that will very likely LEAD to pregnancy. The bulk of the story takes place in an afternoon, so you'll just have to wait and see if anyone ACTUALLY gets pregnant. Tagged with pregnancy just to be on the safe side, though, since it's discussed a bit.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.25
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 4.50
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
A few spellinggrammatical errors, but there was nothing so bad as to distract from the story. I really enjoyed how you applied basic logic to magic in order to not make it OP. I would love to read some more.
Sharklaser
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
So I read your novel in one go cause it was actually good. Good enough to send you some praise which is something I never do. Your information theory 101 to trick the curse was brilliant. But the ending really soured the story for me.
Kudos for figuring out a legitimate reason for rape but then ruining all creditability with necklace wearing off and Jean getting here memories back. You should have either stuck with the permanent change of raping her now hooker friend to become lovers and forgetting about the conversation or not raping and Jean remembering the conversation to have a more healthy relationship.
It's Either Or. Both the story and the ending. Having both weakens the story. To leave on a positive note, this was a good story that had potential for greatness but flubbed the ending with halfhearted shoehorned plot point.
Goocie
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Torque
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Hit all of my favorite fetishes, with the exception of docking, but the forced inflation more then made up for it! Probably only thing I had a problem with was how drawn out the meeting and explanation scene with her friend was. More time could have been spent inflating or growing or experimenting with her, not just fumbling around for the necklace.
Overall, really loved it, a second installment would be amazing!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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