The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Sobtac
Wishes Ad Infinitum - Act III
She just wanted to understand why the world was changing around her, why everyone was suddenly so obsessed with massive tits! The continuing story of Vickie, Jenny, Penny, and Laura who are about to undergo a very, very strange journey when they stumble across a chest that can potentially grant infinite wishes - but not in the way they were expecting.
Average Scores:

Yurba
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
I like it but there is no resolution here  it's all extra set up. Extra set up for something that was already hinted in the last part.

So this entire section is before the last part of ACT II and I dont know if the time jumps work. It is great however and am excited to see where Vickie grows next...
Wildcard
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
I've to reread Act I and II for something feels off in my mind, that Act III continued not where Act II ended. 

But since I'm dyslectic, god knows what my brained F'ed up, so it could just be me.

Anyways I still really enjoy this Wishing Box, the chaos and implication it brings to all their wishes and it makes the story a bit more challenging to read.
Awkwardfoxxy
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Great, but too much world building for me personally
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
Due to comment spam, any new posts with http in them will be destroyed.
Your Nickname:

Rate this story from 1-5 stars (5 stars is best) in the following categories:

Overall Enjoyment(How much did you like the story overall?)
1 2 3 4 5

BE Description (Detail, quantity, quality)
1 2 3 4 5

Characters (Descriptions, likeability)
1 2 3 4 5

Technical Quality (Writing style, grammar, etc.)
1 2 3 4 5

Your comments on the story: