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The Overflowing Bra

Oasis
Ball's Pyramid Ch. 1-3
**Chapter three begins on page 10**. Lulu discovers that she can manipulate her body to her will and meets up with her friend, Meg. Desperate, milky lovemaking ensues. Comment with your ideas for the next chapters. 
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Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Great work so far! Looking forward to the next chapter.
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