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The Overflowing Bra

Fidget
Bimbo Potion: Revenge, Ch. 04
Amy is tired of being pushed around by the girls at work, so she decides to get even with the help of a bimbo potion she finds on the internet.
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Bubs
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I like how the characters are changing mentally, but there was hardly any breast expansion in this story. It happens to one person once and takes place over about one paragraph. 
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