She just wanted men to adore and respect her, what could be wrong with that? The continuing story of Vickie, Jenny, Penny, and Laura who are about to undergo a very, very strange journey when they stumble across a chest that can potentially grant infinite wishes - but not in the way they were expecting.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.50
- Characters: 4.50
- Technical: 4.50
wildcard
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Wasn't expecting the story to shift perspective from Vickie to Jenny, what I find rather interesting and I guess we possibly might see future acts shift perspective to Penny and Laura, but that's just me guessing.
Really liking the story so far and looking forward to reading the next Act
Wokod
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great work! Now I'm curious about what's next!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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