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The Preve
Curves: Part Three and Four
The third and fourth (final) chapters of Curves. Maria and Lynn meet the same curvy fate as Charlotte. 
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Aylamb
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 5
Well written but ultimately felt like the first volumes retread three times in less detail. Characters were basically interchangeable, and when your story is built on three different protagonists it's hard to grade that well considering they all went through basically the same sequence of tfs. 

It has all the weird bio stuff that The Preve is known for, so I went in expecting that just fine.

Spoiler Note
The ending felt a bit off. The characters were given a method of communication that didn't end up serving the plot. So the story ends up at What are we going to do?! And immediately shuts down the characters. It isn't necessarily bad from a fetish perspective but it makes me ask what the point was if they weren't ever engaged with the action of the story postabduction. 
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