The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Svin
All The Things She Is
This is a story about a girl named Kelly.
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 Obfusceight
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5 
I agree with the other guy that the actual description of growth was pretty tame, but that aside this was a very pleasant read. Pretty neat structure you went with there. Good read all around.
 JohnT09
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 5 
I generally enjoyed it, but found that after the initial size, there were no more descriptions, and that her growing was more of an afterthought. And it ended right where it was really about to get good.
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