The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

BEengineer
Cream Filled
Belle is just a happy, go-lucky baker running her shop! She's sweet and can do no wrong. Unless your her competition across the street; then it's time to make her outgrow those annoying overalls.
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Saint Limey
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Belle has a heart of gold and Maya is such a scamp. It's hard not to like a story with lactation and cute girls in overalls. Good job!
FrigOfFury
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
I love this light lactationBE story with an adorably naive character and a happy ending. Its more than a bit silly, but I think thats probably a virtue here.
vicious
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I really liked it , not enough sex for my usual taste but sometimes its nice to have a straight BE story!
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