The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Kodos
Paid in Full, Part I
Short on money and looking to rent out her spare room, Joanna soon discovers being a landlady can be more rewarding than she ever expected.
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HELP
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Can you please upload in a different format?

I'm getting some kind of weird error where the chrome URL is getting split up. I try opening the document and it opens several tabs in chrome, each with a small part of the correct URL. I tried combining them but it didn't work.
Jayyy
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
When is the second part coming? 
brit
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Your best yet.  Short and to the point.  Just fabulous
Kang
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Wanted to rate and encourage you to keep writing! Huge fan of your work, please keep writing!
Goober
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Never made a comment before but this story was so good I had to say something. I love the characters, their reactions to the growth, the amazing detail let me see an entire scene in it's arousing glory. Thanks g
anon
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Amazing as always! I love the realistic sizeweight. Looking forward to the next part.
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