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The Overflowing Bra

Madam Materia
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Welcome to Madam Materia's Magical Menagerie. Visiting today is a small girl, dealt the worst by genetics, who wants to correct her misfortune. Unfortunately you can't change who someone is at their very core.
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Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5 
I'd have liked to see more of the gts elements, but thats personal preferance. Solid story overall.
 j
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Excellent wriing.
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