The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

SveltPig
The City (chapter 4)
Julia's time in the City heats up as trouble brews for both those in charge and the women held captive. New rumors motivate drastic action, and Torch makes a decision she may soon regret.

(This is the fourth chapter of my ongoing story which weaves its narrative of BE and imprisonment from many overlapping perspectives.)
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