A college science experement goes awry, leading to a bit more of a biology lesson than two girls planned for.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.50
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 4.50
- Technical: 4.00
fahzbehn
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Don't normally comment but it was a good story overall that had a good flow. The char as characters were a little cliche, but not so bad that it was distracting.
tinaplaceholder
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
That was absolutely hilarious, the characters and setting were amazing! The science wasn't out of place, it's easy to imagine the machine made the hormones magical or something.
It's difficult to suggest any direct improvements except the ending seems a bit out of place, and a happy epilogue might fit better I'm counting that as technical even though its kinda literary. But overall it was a wonderful story
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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