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Yuris Antiques: True Reflections
A husband with writer's block comes across a mirror that helps him and his business savvy wife reveal who they were always meant to be. 
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Roid Abuser
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
VERY hot.  

Be interested to see how they go about their normal lives now.

Perhaps have him still be clueless about how hot he is and randomly fucking girls that go wild over him.

Maybe even have it take a dark turn, which is where I thought it was going with the gangster bit.  Some super hot pyscho ex of his that he didn't know about show up.  Etc.
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 3
Loved the story! Its unique while not totally unoriginal. In this gendre sp? we should all know where the story is going. the 3 in technical was due to a number of live for Liv's  other typos. Don't take it personally.  I did love the story  the turnaround for both characters. Its a nice touch. Can't wait to see more from you!
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