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The Overflowing Bra

Hourglass Delights
Birthday and Makeup
Another adaptation of a Tieryn story. Yasmin has just turned eighteen, but is dealing with some relationship issues. That all changes when she becomes another B&M test subject.
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Dendrago
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
An extremely wellwritten piece, and a very good length. The expansion and resulting sizes were well detailed, and the characters were written very well 3
Tieryn
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Tie here. Wrote the original version of this back on tumblr last year at some point. Hourglass has taken my loose frame and turned it into a much more fleshed out hehehe tale, adding more depth to the characters and longer expansionsex scenes. All in all, an improvement over my original work.
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