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The Overflowing Bra

Women of the Studpocalypse
The women of a local Medical Complex are one of the holdouts against the Studpocalypse, a virus that turns all men on Earth into zombie-like sex studs literally hung like horses, with infected seed that transforms women and slowly addicts them permanently. 
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Fun story, interesting world which I want to know more about. Could be a little more descriptive on the breast expansion but cant wait for the next chapter!
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Did you write this just for me? Because this is, like, all of my favorite things in one place. More please! 
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
A good story to read. 
MPG Lover
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Next part please!
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
This was very well written, but I have to echo Roid Abuser here a sentence I never thought I'd write and say that I got a little overly caught up in the details as well. I wasn't planning on learning the ins and outs of a fictional disease, but I felt I was getting distracted from my overall enjoyment of the story because my mind kept wanting to track which stage was what and what that meant for the characters. Still very solid work, really hope to see more.
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Awesome story! Can't wait for the continuation. It would be nice to get some more descriptions on the studs growing too. I hope the next part includes Angela and Jessie just growing to extreme proportions and corrupting the entire camp too.
Roid Abuser
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Well written and fun story.

For whatever reason, it didn't turn my crank, which is weird because I am a fan of mutual oversexualization and muscles.  A girlfriend also a extreme weightlifter called me a musclesexual.  I think it's because I got caught up in the apocalypse part of the story and started thinking about things like how will they get food after a bit.  That said, that's my problem, and a good story.
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Awesome story, nice background to what the author wanted the world to be like, and very nice progression, always like a story where the male changes and adapts just like the female.
Looking forward to part 2!
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Fun story! Always like a good big dick addiction with my BE.
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