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The Overflowing Bra

Kodos
Closing Time, Part 3
Desperate for sex, Kelli's insatiable desire threatens to leave her more voluptuous than even she is willing to become.
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Aylamb
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
I rarely review on here but had to make an exception because this pushed so many good buttons for me. Now that you're dipping into other transformative treats, the original concept is allowed to grow even more. I look forward to reading more Kodos, either in this line or whatever comes next.
bStretcher
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Awesome! Please do more!
It would be great if more chocolates arrive and maybe make her nipples just as big as her womanhood.
Darker nipples, hair growth, more everything!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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