Two stories packed into one.
The first introduces us to a girl with a rare disease that causes her to lactate uncontrollably and her young scientist roommate who doubles as a caretaker.
The second delves deeper into the life of our lactating cutie, Odette, and follows her to her job at the local college.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.50
- BE: 3.50
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 5.00
Xorand
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I loved the characters. They had a quality of being someone you could actually meet vs a caricature. The stories felt a little short, but perhaps that is more of a fault of being wellwritten and being easytoread. I look forward to more chronicles of Odette.
hungryhobo
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This was a great read. I personally enjoy stories that talk about the slow growth up to the point that they get massive. Establishing how she gets that big and the reason why is a great bit of description that adds to my investment to the story, especially when odette starts to milk her.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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