The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Nairny
The Machine
When Nancy's boyfriend tells her about his expansion fetish, she immediately sets to work on creating a machine that will let his fantasies become a reality. There is one thing she didn't plan for though... how much it would mess with her mind.
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Anonymous
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
It's alright but a bit lackluster
Bam
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great job!
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