When Nancy's boyfriend tells her about his expansion fetish, she immediately sets to work on creating a machine that will let his fantasies become a reality. There is one thing she didn't plan for though... how much it would mess with her mind.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.67
- BE: 4.33
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 4.33
flies
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
lots of fun. Nancy's mental transformation really makes the story. Clean prose, too!
Anonymous
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
It's alright but a bit lackluster
Bam
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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