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The Overflowing Bra

Body Shifters Tri Chapter 2
Both Michael and Jessica figure out they need to work out what is happening to them. Between a pair of Doctors, a bodyguard, and a nurse name Cherry, Michael may not know what hit him, or in this case a lot of sex with him. Included in this one is a long make-out session. Even the twins see the need to keep Michael around.
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Captain pickle
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 3
Moar! this has so much potential!
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Thx a lot to bring the 'BSU' back to life. 
Misses some kinky scenes e.g. more cloth transformations ...
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
loving the story hope that Jessica pulls through
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Keep up the great work. More Lactation 
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