The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Nanotech Bimbo
My first work in this genre! A girl has become a test subject for new nanite body mods that can alter everything about her with controls on a phone app. Pretty tame in this one but later ones are sure to get weird!
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Roid Abuser
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Fun story.
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Hope to see plenty more from you!
Uncle Stump
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
excellent writing quality. Very descriptive and easy to read. Interesting story I can't wait to see where it goes next.
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