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The Overflowing Bra

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My Hero Acadamia Expansion Sequence I did for a contest that won, the pic I got as a prize is included at the end. 

Mei Htasume is a genius inventor that makes gadgets to help heroes do their job, but something goes wrong and one of her gadgets has some very very good results. 
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Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Don't let comments from trolling no tallents like dee get to you. It was a bit rushed, I agree but it was pretty well imagined and having a piece of art to go with it is a nice tough. Thanks for sharing!
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 2
Still leave a bit to be desired content wise, my advice is slow down in how the presentation of how the expansion is occurring in the tale.  With how fast you made it sound, even if it was part of the plot item's effect needs to be a bit more drawn out to be more effective.
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Get this weeb shit out of here. 
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