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The Overflowing Bra

BEengineer
Commission, Wish for a Wish
WARNING, CONTAINS COCK AND BALL GROWTH WITH GOREY BALL BURSTING (but don't worry, the tits are fine)

A commission, concerning a guy who gets a bit more than he married for after wishing for a girls chest to swell with milk.
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HeliumGirl
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 2
Hailey becomes Claire at some point. Try to be consistent with names.
Anonymous
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Good story! Although if there's bursting I would have enjoyed comeuppance for both parties and even bigger sizes!
Anonymous
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
Seriously alter the end dude.
Anonymous
Overall= 2, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
The bit at the end was the most disgusting bonerkill i've ever read, it actually made me gag.
HomacidalWolf
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Best shit, you should make an alt version where he cums though. Not saying the ending is bad, just a little anticlimactic.
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