The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

willgmovie
Racheal grows
My girlfriend out grows me
Average Scores:

Corner1
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
I thought the story as a whole was good, but I didnt like that Rachel became overly aggressive and hostile. I think thats a trope thats pretty boring 
not be
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
its got some other stuff but be ain't one.
Ouro
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
I really enjoyed the story and the steady clip at which Rachel grew into a tall, busty, amazon of a woman. However her character motivation was a bit confusing. I can understand why she would have wanted to be taller, but not why she was so insistent on growing to such a colossal size. It also would have been a bit better if the story spent some more time with Rachel at her bigger size. A followup would be very fun read!
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