The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

greatpersonhooray
Growing Pains II - Above Average
Natalie has grown from a flat chest to a comfortable size, but her breasts show no sign of stopping. Additionally, she faces bullying from her peers due to her increasing bust.
Average Scores:

argusceo
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Excellent premise. I can't wait to see where you take it. 
Dubby
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
what a great story you keep the balance of character development and sexual content throughout the story..the main character is so engaging the detail and realistic pace is one of my fav story types

may i make a slight suggestion?..regarding part twoo..could Natalie experience growth in height as well..nothing extreme but maybe so she ends up at a commanding height over the bitch girls?
Panda
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Excellent story! Would like to see a bit more of the expansion, the weight she experiences,the jiggling. 
Squigy
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Very cool really like the idea.
milkaholic
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great story! Can't wait for the rest!
Myzery
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great series so far!!! I can't wait to see what happens when she starts running out of money! Hoping the growing tits make her hornier 
Red
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Really good! Only comment I'd make, for her breast growth and voluminous lactation, Natalie is going to have to be eating a lot more than normal. And taking in a lot of water. Hoping to see that in the next chapters. thanks!
pervert
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
our hero!
kathy23
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
A worthy sequel. A bit shorter but I still enjoyed it. Can't wait to see where it goes next, hopefully bigger and milkier!
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