The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

greatpersonhooray
Growing Pains I - Milky Beginning
A young woman with a flat chest finds herself growing larger - and milkier - by the day as she struggles with day-to-day life and the consequences of her condition.
Average Scores:

Red
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Very, very good! Only demurrer  personally I don't get the attraction of the girl drinking her own milk, but terrific story 
kathy23
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Really loved this one and I hope you put them out fast!
pervert
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
my only critique is that there isn't any more to read!

looking forward to the next chapter!
Anon
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Amazing! Can't wait for the next instalment. Hopefully very soon!
Bobinads
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
Simply brilliant, the drawnout growth is great, and I'm looking forward to more!
cman
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Absolutely fantastic.  I LOVE the drawn out description of slow growth, and the teasing that she's going to go big.  I cannot wait to see what's in store for this young lady.
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