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The Overflowing Bra

Rols Garten
Goddess Hunt 2
The goddess of love makes herself known to Samantha and Olivia, with a warning for both of them. Meanwhile Paul and Allison arrive in Japan and have a run in with some locals.
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Anon
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great chapter! Love the integration of Denise and Tanya, the writing is fantastic and the action in every sense is well distributed and described. Illustrations were a lovely bonus too. My favourite writer here continues!
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