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When a Magician Is Foiled Part 1
When a woman ends up in charge of the magician's Flesh Alteration Kit and more, bizarre havoc ensues.
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Chaos-Master
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

I agree with DarkHeart that Stephanie should get a taste of her own medicine. Preferably from the Magician himself when He is released,
or from the two poor girls in her clutches

DarkHeart
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

Well written as is usually the case, but that is some very sick shit. Though I wouldn't mind seeing Part 2 and that bitch getting hers.

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