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The Overflowing Bra

Carnival Balloons
An adult themed carnival has a few surprises in story for Mariel
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Loved this story!  Great premise.  I especially like the way she goes from prudish to excited about her growth by the end of the story!  Her reactions felt completely genuine and her evolution was very believable.  My only gripe would be that the growth was too fast and over with, and the depiction of her size and the implications were understated.
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
It was one of the best Ive read in a while. I hope you plan to do another with some other things happening at the carnival with these characters. Maybe even another one similar to this with different characters. Please do another this was awesome. 
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Fun, enjoyable, exciting romp.
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great  BE story ! No more to say !
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