The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

The creature
The unsatisfied couple
A married couple in a dry spell. Until now.
Average Scores:
 Eragon 
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 3 
One of the hottest shorts Ive ever read. Would love to see more from you
 Eddie
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4 
Liked the story. The plot was great and flowed.

As to spelling, etc., you are using Word, it appears, so use the Spellcheck as much as you can. It will catch the weird typos.
 bobby apples
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4 
Really enjoyed it. More please!
 anon
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 3 
It was fine, a little perfunctory.
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