The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

The creature
The unsatisfied couple
A married couple in a dry spell. Until now.
Average Scores:

bobby apples
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Really enjoyed it. More please!
anon
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
It was fine, a little perfunctory.
Meh
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 2
Meh.
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