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The Overflowing Bra

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Two roommates bicker and strange things seem to happen as a result...
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Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Nice work. I got into it, wanting Carol to shut up. Mysterious light. Cute ending. Real people messing with unreal stuff.
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
I loved it. Im a big fan of these sort of playfullyNC transformations. Especially when the real life ramifications dawn on those involved. I really enjoyed! I too wish it were a bit more drawn out and detail, but thats just wanting more 
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I liked it, but why not both AG and BE in the same person? Any way we can get a hourglass edit? Just felt like the story didn't reach its potential. I actually liked the pace of the changes.
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
The main problem is not the set up, but the fact it was more of poof style changes once the wishes were made rather than the gradual build up.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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