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The Overflowing Bra

Fahzbehn
fahzbehn@yahoo.com
A Bimbo Birthday
A commission I did for Fillerbunee where his wife and her best friend both take Bimball and end up giving him the best birthday ever.
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maybeenuf4u
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I really liked the story. Original w new ideas. I was esp happy to see the hucow. One of my things. Keep it up.  
Giant Fuzzy Pig
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I have to concur with the other person who said it moved a bit too fast.  The story was still enjoyable.  If there's a sequel, I'd be interested in it.  I noticed a few grammar errors and things spell check wouldn't catch.  Like 'gave both of their butts a swap' on page 4, which is probably not what you meant.
Bb47
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Little too fast for me, but decent concept.  Not really into brainless women myself.
vicious800x
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I've been reading stories from this site for 15 years, and this is by far my favorite that I've ever read. It's right up my alley in every way possible. Thanks for the story, I hope you continue it!
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