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The Overflowing Bra

Terance Lee Fields
Lena Gushman
Lena Gushman is a brilliant, acerbic university student with one problem; her breasts are too big! With the support of her lover Harriet, Lena opts for what she thinks is a straightforward breast reduction surgery. But Dr. Glaugurm's procedures have a way of... reversing themselves.
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
A quick and very sexy read. My main gripe is that certain parts were too rushed, and the author certainly could have been more deatiled in the whole BE process. rnThe ending was superhot, I mean, what's not to love about ultrabusty, slimwaisted, fatbottomed, airheade, cockhungry minigiantesses that lactate a Be'ing, bimbofying booze?

Overall, I give it a 45. The author could have mined for more BE and character progression detail, since there is a lot of meat to the characters, and they were fairly welldeveloped early. But, it's a short and highly enjoyable reading experience, which is probably what the author was intending. 

Definitely recommended.
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