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The Overflowing Bra

Merkava IV
Saint, Sinner, Succubus Chapter VII
Chapter 7 of Saint, Sinner, Succubus.

In this installment, we immediately follow up the events that ended chapter six, along with the introduction of some major players on the side of evil, then there's a mile high club induction, complete with some clothes bursting, and finally, the reemergence of Angela. 
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Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Since it's been a week, without comments, and the download count has been pretty low for this author based on past performance, I'll just say this

I really, really HATE the PDF format. Not a big fan of DRM generally, or Adobe in particular.

Despite the PDF, I enjoyed this story up through part 5, but like many others have noted, part 6 was not easily or at all available on the 'free' site. I was unable to get anymore than the excerpt provided in the download.

And now comes part 7, with a note about the events that ended part 6 which manymost? of us couldn't read. Very disappointing.

Can you at least make the full part 6 available?
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I am REALLY loving this series, and cannot wait for the rest of it to come out! I am really loving the relationship between Matt and Natalie, and loving her struggle to be good and the challenges she has to go through
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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