The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Rols Garten
Convention Dreams
After a run in with a mysterious woman claiming to be a Norse goddess, three friends spending the weekend at a convention find their costumes looking a little too good. 
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Roid Abuser
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
Nice start to a story, but it's a bit of a squib.  Now have her nerd friendzoned dude dress as Superman
Kronk15
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
I liked it especially the inclusion of superpowers but it is somewhat short for publishing
huge hugh
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
liked it
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