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The Overflowing Bra

Story of my Life - Chapters 1 & 2
Juli and Helia explore the challenges of living together when Juli's boobs are bigger than hot air balloons! 
A huge hangar built just to house Juli's giant breasts gives plenty of room for some naughty time together, and Helia helps Juli grow from massive to truly enormous! 
Chapters 1 and 2 included in the zip file.  
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Didnt enjoy it
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Felt amateurish at best.
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
Yay, more stuff!! And some sex. And orgasms! Great story! Though the description of boob growth in Chapter 2 falls a bit short. While its quite difficult to describe for the protagonist, cause she can't see anything, maybe you could find a way to expand this a little? EG to describe, how she feels her boobs sliding over the floor or the like?
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