The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Rols Garten
Family Legacy: A Paul's Problems Story
A dream about her mother on the eve of her twentieth birthday heralds a great change for Tanya and two of her friends. What is she becoming? Why is she suddenly so horny and hungry all the time? And what does this have to do with a little shop that wasn't there yesterday?
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Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
A few spelling errors, but fantastic anyways. Compelling enough that I kept reading just for the story.
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Dude it was anasing. We need more. And please make nerd guy more muscular and confident. Much more. Thank you.
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Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Another classic
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