The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Ugly Until Altered
An ugly nerdy girl finds herself befriending the highschool hunk. He's way too handsome and she's way too ugly for anything to happen.

Average Scores:

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Nice first contribution. good writing skills. Hope to read more of your work.
Lily Bunny
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 1, Technical= 3
Not a very satisfying story. Unlikable characters, very plain BE and transformation discription, and over all just not sexy. The writing itself was fine, no major grammar or spelling issues, but I just hated every character in this story and was not invested in anything that was happening. 
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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