The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

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Molly’s family just moved to a new town, and she has trouble fitting in.
Average Scores:

Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
It was a good story, but the BE was barely there. You're style of writing is easy to read and creates an enjoyable story. It would be fun to see you do a story with a bit more expansion. I look forward to seeing more from you in the future. 
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Well written.rnThe BE was scarce.  I liked the characters and the premise of the story is new.  Different.  It's like this is a precursor.  I hope you keep writing 
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BE Description (Detail, quantity, quality)
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