Veronica is an extremely neurotic conspiracy theorist and would-be journalist who believes she's on the verge of exposing a global Illuminati plot to genetically inflate womens' breasts and turn humanity into obedient cattle. It's all completely insane and probably a product of her mental disorders. Unless...she's on to something. *Special Thanks to Deviant Art user AussieLuvTail, who helped fix and save the ending to this story with sharp story insight.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 2.83
- BE: 3.33
- Characters: 3.33
- Technical: 3.67
sans
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
ktc1221
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
If I make it so she's mortified by the way she looks, it becomes so easy to humiliate the character merely by having her in public, in various states of vulnerability. direct quote from ExPFCWintergreen
I didn't really read any of the story, just bits and pieces as I browsed his DA briefly. This one looks like a pass for me. I'm posting this merely as another warning for others like me who don't wish to read about the things stated above, as there's all of that and more within.
To the authors credit, it's not poorly written. It's just subject matter I tend to avoid.
gotee
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Veronica is an unforgettable character, and her paranoia gripped me from the first page. All we know is that something is dreadfully wrong, but we don't know what it is with certainty until the denoument. The growth is increasingly associated with lactation.rnI absolutely adored this story, and consider it a new classic.
That one
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Same as the other posters, wish there was a noncon tag and it is a heavy, dark story, especially compared to all the superhero stuff on here recently. But this is a great, deep, erotic story and I enjoyed it greatly.
Ktc
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
I feel my prior comment was opinion, I have since left a more valuable critique over on the Reddit. In short the story is very sad and I didn't like it which unfortunately leaves me with a bias outlook. I think the title Character Veronica is fantastic and you really feel for her struggle as he story goes on. The end was not what I expected.
Russian Judge
Overall= 2, BE= 4, Characters= 1, Technical= 2
Too dark. Way too dark. There's often hatred of women in erotica, but this went beyond the pale for me. And the mad scientist characters were too cliched.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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